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Title: Sand
Pair: Kikumaru/Kaidoh
Rating: PG
Summary: A day at the beach.
It's too bad Kikumaru doesn't top nearly as often as he should.

Kaidoh was asleep on the beach and covered in sand. It was hard to believe that such a diligent person would risk a sunburn for a quick nap, but Kaidoh apparently found sleep easily and soundly for he hadn't even noticed being half-covered in sand by his little brother and his pack of miniature marauders.

The mischievous urge to wake Kaidoh up with a bucket of sea water was too much for Kikumaru to handle. Soon, he was dumping the whole lot of it over Kaidoh's bare and browning chest. Kaidoh woke with an immediate scowl then a slight expression of surprise.

"Hazue!" he shouted immediately with surprising strength. "You little bastard, I'm gonna kill you! I don't care what Mom says!"

A distant cry responded: "That's what you get for sleeping, stupid aniki!" along with a collection of jeers and hollers.

It was inappropriate to laugh, but Kikumaru did so anyway, while some part of his mind - the part that recognized he hadn't had any in a good long while - admired the projection of his voice (a captain's voice, certainly) as well as the angry, stubborn collection of sand around Kaidoh's legs and waist and torso (a captain's body, too).

Kikumaru contemplated for a moment the idea of jerking Kaidoh off under the guise of helping him get rid of that remaining sand (beneath the umbrella, away from the glaring heat of the sun, with everyone around them - and Kaidoh would complain and fight back until the moment he came).

It'd be so satisfying to do it, just have Oishi's jealousy simmering from a distance - that wanting forcing Oishi's eyes to remain, his brightly burning desire heating Kikumaru's back - or to have Fuji watching, pleased and angry, with a tight smile and a calm suggestion of what Kikumaru should do with his hands to make Kaidoh gasp and groan beneath his sandy touch.

Kikumaru sighed at the missed opportunity as he watched Kaidoh dust off what remained of his half-burial and pull a face as he touched the top of the swimming trunks. Kaidoh glanced longingly at the water.

"Go ahead," Kikumaru said, teasingly as he gestured toward the sea. "I won't tell anyone."

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Date: 2007-10-28 08:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reader-a.livejournal.com
Kikumaru??? and Kaidoh...
*sighs in releif* Just as friends...
You had me scared there for a bit^^
Very cute.

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Date: 2007-10-28 08:06 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sarisia.livejournal.com
Loffle. What a cute response!
And well... "just as friends"? I don't have many friends that would consider public masturbation with a friend.

I suppose you can be relieved that he doesn't do anything about it.

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Date: 2007-10-28 08:07 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sarisia.livejournal.com
Wait. Strike masturbation and make that molestation.

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Date: 2007-10-28 08:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] falls-whisper.livejournal.com
Awww, I'm rather disappointed now :(

Make Eiji's dream come true ;) Pweez?

You make any pairing amazing to read XD

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Date: 2007-10-29 04:49 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sarisia.livejournal.com
^___^; I have contemplated it.

Haha, thank you.

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Date: 2007-10-28 12:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] selarne
Eiji's silly...and strange...and Fuji will kill him if he touches Kaidoh.

Your pairing choices scare me.

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Date: 2007-10-29 05:16 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sarisia.livejournal.com
Ahah, sorry about the scary pairs. Will you accept them if they choose me and not the other way around? LIES. I TOTALLY CHOSE THEM.

Wouldn't that make the fic exciting if Eiji had touched then?

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Date: 2007-10-28 11:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] audny-albatross.livejournal.com
This would be an awesome pairing, especially if Eiji topped (so many people forget he's not a girl in a guy's body...). I liked the part with Fuji -- how he's jealous but... not? Except that he is. But I thought the battle of emotions was especially potent. Fuji sharing Kaidou unwillingly... yeah. That basically turned me into a puddle of goo. ^^; Fuji rules the universe.

I also like that Eiji doesn't try, because he's smart enough not to do that -- he's not going to jeopardise his relationships on a whim -- and he doesn't really seem to regret it -- because, like I said, he's smarter than that.

Erm. Yeah ^^;

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Date: 2007-10-29 05:30 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sarisia.livejournal.com
Eiji would totally top. Hands down, just because of how he's thinking. Because in his thoughts, even though Kaidoh's fighting against the pleasure of it, Eiji's completely certain that he could go through with it without any problems - even though he doesn't.

Also, so glad that you liked Fuji in the background. I'm so happy that someone picked that up. XD THANK YOU.

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Date: 2007-11-03 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shikanashi-kk.livejournal.com
I marvel at the fact that this has so many pairings fit within just a few words. *_____* Yay Kikumaru! XD

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Date: 2007-11-04 01:53 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sarisia.livejournal.com
Be awed by my prowess? XD

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Date: 2007-11-04 11:23 am (UTC)

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Date: 2007-11-25 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chez-maltesers.livejournal.com
I enjoyed this :3 You hardly ever see Kaidou/Kikumaru around, and it's nice to see them together. There are so many tenipuri pairings that don't get enough love and this is one of them.

And I'm happy Hazue's in it too. XD I love that kid. ♥ Just like a mini Kaidou.

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Date: 2007-11-25 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chez-maltesers.livejournal.com
Mini Kaoru, I should say. He is already a Kaidou himself. XD

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Date: 2007-11-25 06:06 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sarisia.livejournal.com
Ahah, true. I didn't catch that. XD

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Date: 2007-11-25 06:06 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sarisia.livejournal.com
It's true. All of tenipuri is slashable throughout without any holds. I'm surprised that more people don't take advantage of this.

And Hazue is always great to have around. He can make many things more than they are just by his mere presence.

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